i had intention of posting before i left this weekend
so i followed up on that intention
time my run and see how far
it takes for me to reach a star,
and look back with triumphant gaze
and never see you, only space.
happiness to slide away,
with just cause a smile grows faint,
friends can't part like Red Sea waves,
despondent Gods can never save.
drift in peace, and sail to space,
float round planets of my face,
watch me from your falling star
and fall away, and fall afar.
quietly dissolve in time,
escape the shadows of my mind.
leave me here, with just a trace,
so all I have is time and space.
be a star, and fall to me,
mirror my astrology.
be a ship, forever flight,
and silently pass in my night.
11 comments:
be a star, and fall to me,
mirror my astrology.
i like /that/ line(s)
im assuming that you wrote that. it's pretty awesome. how long did it take?
following up on intentions is nice, especially when the intention is to write something like this.
i really like it.
ya I love the lines that tara quoted
my favourite would have to be:
and look back with triumphant gaze
and never see you, only space
because i see what it's saying, i like to think.
i also love that line.
wow brent, amazing text.
learn something new about people every day.
goodness brent...you have too much talent. how can i compare with such a cousin? : )
beats me
and andy, i think you do know what's it's saying
which is why you said that
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