Thursday, November 09, 2006

watermark

i count to three and grin
you smile and let me in
we sit and watch the wall you painted purple
speech will spill on space
our little cups of grace
but pauses rattle on about the way that you cut the snow-fence,
braved the blood,
the metal of those hearts that you always end up pressing your tongue to
how your body still remembers things you told it to forget
how those furious affections followed you

i've got this store-bought way of saying i'm okay,
and you learned how to cry in total silence
we're talented and bright
we're lonely and uptight
we've found some lovely ways to disappoint,
but the airport's almost empty this time of the year,
so let's go play on a baggage carousel
set our watches forward like we're just arriving here
from a past we left in a place we knew too well

11 comments:

Anonymous said...

i love this one. it sticks all sorts of images into my head. i esp love the whole first section..then the four lines of airport-ness.
love
teej

Anonymous said...

i like the airport stuff. sounds like fun, i'd like to do that.

Nicole said...

you've posted it before haven't you? cause the "store-bought way of saying i'm okay" part is stuck in my head. its amazing

Anonymous said...

definitely loving this one too.

i love the last four airport lines and the "i've got this store-bought way of saying i'm okay" too.

Anonymous said...

nicole, i think he just reused the idea.

Anonymous said...

I am goign to make a song out of this. It'll be sweet.

Anonymous said...

good luck abram. (and how do you know brent hasnt;) )

Anonymous said...

lets play a game..:
whats missing?

Brent said...

you tell me

Elysha said...

I love this, Brent. I'm going to save it if that's alright with you.

Brent said...

go right ahead elysha